Love that sneaky bit of foreshadowing in Ron's POV. Great chappie.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I absolutely love writing foreshadowing and cliffhangers, it's a bad habit of mine xD Next chapter should be up eventually, once I have it written and edited.

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~MadiMalfoy

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Here for the Ravenclaw Review Battle!
I like where this is going so far, though Malfoy and Hermione feel pretty out of character. It's not necessarily a bad thing though- just an observation. However, one thing that I noticed that you might want to fix- when you have Draco thinking to himself, you have him refer to himself as Malfoy, rather than as Draco. I'm not sure if that was intentional, but it felt a bit odd. On the whole though, this story is intriguing, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter (in spite of my bias against Draco/Hermione stories).
~M

Author's Response: This was one of my very first chapters ever written and I didn't really know where I wanted to go with it, so I just kind of wrote it. I will be going back later and changing quite a few things in the first few chapters so they stay as close to canon as possible. Read some of my later chapters and I think you'll like it a little better. :) I'm glad you find it intriguing even though you don't like Draco/Hermione, it makes me happy! :) Thanks for the review xx
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Loving the book great chapter:)) please update soon cant wait to find out what happens!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Should have something posted within a month of this or That Escalated Quickly, depending on writing time and such. Thanks for sticking with me! :) xx
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Please add more soon I'm going crazy!

Author's Response: Thank you! It'll probably be 2+ weeks before I get something new up because I have to write it still and I've got exams coming up so I'm getting super busy with those. I'll try my best! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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Soo when's the next chap?r

Author's Response: That's actually a good question...I haven't had a chance to write anything up yet as I just finished writing this chapter so it may be a while. I'm hoping within a month to have this updated again along with another one of my stories. Check out my other stories if you'd like too, I'd love to hear your thoughts on them! xx
~MadiMalfoy

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It's taken me ages to get around to reading this but I finally have! Really liked this chapter, especially the Draco/Hermione moments-the hand holding was particularly sweet :) I'm enjoying the sense of mystery, I can't wait to find out if it was Theodore or someone unexpected!
There was one part that confused me, you switched from third to first person in the first part,
"Hermione threw Draco a quick glance before getting up with the others and leaving the office, shutting the door behind her." Is third person, then
"Adjusting my position in the chair so my arm hurt less, I absentmindedly observed the office." straight after, in first person.
Other than that minor detail, a brilliant chapter! xx

Author's Response: Oh thank you!! I must have missed that in my proofreading! I will fix that right away! I know how I want this to end, but I'm just not sure how I want to get there exactly, so the turn it took in this chapter even surprised me! But I have the next couple chapters planned out, it's just a matter of getting them written and posted, along with updating other stories. Thanks for the lovely review! :) xx
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oh my oh my oh my goddd.how can u update so many chapters so fasst? wow LLM is going so so great i cant tell u how much i like this story>???



aah nd their kis.so so so lovely.hahah and ron coming so suddenly banging on the door..hee hee lolzz funny moment..


ur really a very osom author :)

u'll get my next review in ur one shot maybe :)



dramione rockzz
shinichi

Author's Response: The reason I can update so "quickly" is because if I have time to write, I write a lot, and very fast. Then I post it and the queue usually takes a while but then magically goes down to next to nothing and it gets updated! I've had a little bit more free time recently as well so that's a part of it. Thanks for sticking with me :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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Ravenclaw Review Tag!
So I'm going to preface this by saying that usually i hate Draco/Hermione stories because they feel incredibly forced. But I really do like the prologue of this one. I do wish you'd specify where they are (is the corridor at Hogwarts--I'm assuming so, but maybe clarify? This is wonderfully written and even in such a short chapter you paint the scene so beautifully, it feels like I'm there watching this intimate moment between them. You're an incredibly talented writer, and I do plan on reading more of your writing.
~M

Author's Response: When I wrote this in September, my writing skills weren't quite so developed so I may have to go back later and edit some things with the first few chapters. I'm glad you didn't turn away because it's Draco/Hermione and you don't really ship it (It's my main OTP) and actually thought it was good! Thanks for the review :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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LOVE LOVE LOVE! Oh this is getting even better! So excited to keep reading! You write so wonderfully!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much!! I haven't posted anything new for a while, but that should change soon! (Hopefully) Thanks for reading and the reviews! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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Loving this! Such a great story! I'm a sucker for a Dramoine fanfic. =)

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Amazing story, do continue soon! :) I read it all to day and have enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm about 40% of the way through the next chapter but have some other things to do before I post it! Some good things will happen, I promise! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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I love this so far!!! When is the next one gunna be out???

Author's Response: Thank you!! :) The next chapter should be out within two-three weeks, I have loads of other stuff keeping me busy and away from my computer! D': Thanks for the review! xx
~Madimalfoy

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I am starting to HATE your cliffhangers. Alot.

Author's Response: But you like everything else, right? :) I'm sorry, I just had to put this cliffhanger in there. I promise, no cliffhanger next chapter!! xx
~MadiMalfoy

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Please continue, I absolutely love this story! You are an amazing writer. Please continue!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just recently got sick so I haven't been able to write much, as I've simply been too tired. But I'm feeling better so hopefully I'll get something up within the month, if not sooner! Unfortunately, it also depends on how full my schedule gets, and right now it's going to be pretty busy. Thanks for the sweet compliment, it means a lot! xx
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It's really good but you need to update the fic more often

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I will try to get a chapter up here within a week since spring break starts tomorrow. However, I am beta-ing for two people so getting their stuff back to them and updating my other stories is higher priority right now. But I promise to get the next chapter written and posted ASAP after I get all of that done! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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Oh my gosh. you're story is ace and your cliffhangers are kiling me lol. but they are also brilliant, great job so far i look forwards to find out what happens next :)

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I love writing cliffhangers--they're just so much fun to write and I know the readers want more! :D Good (well, not really) things happen in the next chapter! Thanks for the review! :) xx
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This is a brilliant story, but some of it just seems to American, for instance in the chapter previous to this one, 'potpie' I've never seen a fellow English person eat it. :/ apart from the American things, it is a really good story, and i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah I just kind of realized that, so I will go back later and edit that. I apologize for the American things, but it's not something I can completely help as I am an American! Thank you so much! I'm currently writing the next chapter! Thanks for the review! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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Interesting chapter, I just love Draco Herminie love story's

Author's Response: Thank you! Check out my other stories as well if you'd like! :) xx
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Ah please update soon i need to know what happens next, anyway awsome chapter i really love your book.

Author's Response: Thanks! Something should be up here eventually for one of my stories! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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Great job! I really want this to be continued so keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is in the queue right now! :) xx
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I cannot stop reading!!! although now I have to wait :( really really really looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I just posted the next chapter into the queue so it should be up in a couple of days! :) Thanks for the kind review! xx
~MadiMalfoy

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well i didnt reveiw for this earlier but wanted to tell you that i hate cliffhangers! But the chapter was too too good! love LMM! 10/10

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I really liked this alot! I love LMM! please update soon and keep on writing more stories!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm kind of bogged down right now AND I'm beta-ing for two people so it'll be eventually here! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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oh my god its perfect

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! :) You won't think so with the last few chapters I have up though. Keep reading, thanks so much! :) xx
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Ah i really do wander what happrned in the kitchen, but anyway please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Well actually, Draco and Hermione did the dishes and talked a little bit in the kitchen, but of course Harry wouldn't know that! It's going to be a while since I have to start writing the next chapter and figure out what I really want to happen to kind of have a small peak in the story and tie some other things in as well. Thanks for the review! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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