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Review #1, by The Claw of Raven trials and decisions

29th October 2012:
I see what you're trying to do here and I commend you for attempting something original. I think this format could be effective but not as is.

For one, there simply must be punctuation. I find it too distracting to read otherwise. Also, since the entire thing is essentially dialogue, could you not use an alternative to quotes. I would suggest more of a script set-up. Something like:

Malfoy: (enters house) I am a jerk.
Hermione: (smiles enthusiastically) Yes, indeed you are.
Malfoy: But I love you ...

Something like that. It's just a thought. In any case, keep writing. I'll move on to the next couple of chapters now.

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Review #2, by N trials and decisions

20th October 2012:
Very good. Too bad Draco is a jerk. Please Update

Author's Response: hopefully will soon got writers block :/


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