This story was absolutely wonderful! I really loved it! I haven't read many stories with characters in their early thirties, especially with next gen characters like Teddy and Victoire, but I really loved how you wrote them! They're so sweet together, and I can tell that they really love each other, just from the way he thinks about her, and the way they act together. Your descriptions were gorgeous, and I could clearly picture the beach, the deserted hilltop, the island, and the cottage.
Overall I think this story is really well written, and the pace is perfect. We can feel Victoire's sense of urgency with wanting to have a baby, but it doesn't feel rushed. Fantastic job! 10/10
Cassie :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so happy you liked how the story was written - it was a bit of a risky shot, writing characters like Teddy and Victoire in their early thirties, and putting them into a rather unusual situation (especially when one considers the Weasley genes for procreation...) - but I'm glad to think that it's paid off! Thanks again for your review! Report Review
This is beautiful. There is just too much to like about this story: the fact that Victoire and Teddy are older characters, the bittersweet ending, the way they interact with each other, the way their surrender is their choice. It's all just perfectly done.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks very much for your lovely review! I'm so glad that you liked it. :) Report Review
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