Reading Reviews for A Heart of Ice
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Review #1, by StarFeather Promise?

24th August 2015:
Hi, Jenn! Thank you for review swap!

The banner of three Slytherins attracted me so I chose this. The title was also intriguing.

I wondered over whose heart of ice itíll be. When I finished reading this, Iím still wondering whose heart you meant. Itís deciphered in various ways.

At first, I thought Bellatrix will tempt Lucius after their wedding, but she was so cruel to tell her sister that she had had an affair with him on their wedding day! Besides, she confessed that in front of all people invited to the ceremony.

It was unexpected that Lucius responded to Bellatrixís wild action, which is bold for him to behave like that. But he wasnít brave enough to face the threatening motion from Narcissa. If he pretends to love her from now on, the act itself will be a heart of ice.

The same thing will suit Narcissa as well. She will pretend to be a model wife but nobody guesses what feeling is whirling inside her. So she may be the coldest person among them.

Poor Draco. I hope they will love and respect each other after their wedding.


Author's Response: Hi Kenny!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this story! I am really happy that you were unsure of who's heart I meant since I really wanted the reader to have the chance to interpret what they thought and how they felt. I am super happy to know that it worked!

I hope you enjoyed it and thank you again for the review swap! :)


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Review #2, by EverDiggory Promise?

15th October 2012:
You wrote a lucius/narcissa and you didn't even tell me? D; hurt over here, truly hurt;)

I loved this. The idea of a love triangle between Lucius, Bellatrix and Narcissa is so deliciously dramatic! I loved how Bellatrix was so...take charge. You know I'm a huge Lucius/Narcissa shipper but the thought of Bellatrix and Lucius together is to cute! I love it! You should write more stuff like this:D



Author's Response: I'm sorry I didn't tell you. I have been on the fence about this story. I am glad that you liked it. I have always thought that there could have been this rivalry between Narcissa and Bellatrix over Lucius.

Thank you so much!!

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