7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Eb74 The Hogwarts Express

11th November 2012:
Great chapter. I love the way you tied in with the original story.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was definitely tricky to keep all the dates and facts consistent.

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Review #2, by NerdyTeddy The Hogwarts Express

31st October 2012:
Aha!
I totally knew she was evil. I think Georgie (tehe) should punch her when she becomes popular, because Olive is mean. Yeah.
I used the word mean :)

Author's Response: I don't know if "Georgie" has it in her ... haha Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by RosePygmyPuff The Hogwarts Express

30th October 2012:
Great chapter! You brought up so many questions about Hogwarts that I've thought of as well. The excerpt from the book was really well done. I didn't want the chapter to end! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to get another one up soon ...

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Review #4, by NerdyTeddy Diagon Alley

20th October 2012:
I reeeally like this :D
I haven't read too many stories about the Ravenclaw family that wasn't centered around Rowena or her first daughter. Seeing a distant, mysterious relative is different and interesting.
Good plot, excellent grammar. When are you updating next?

Author's Response: Thanks!! I've got the next chapter written ... just going over it now :)

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Review #5, by RosePygmyPuff Diagon Alley

18th October 2012:
I like how you basically kept Diagon Alley the same and just imagined what little things would have changed over time. It was really easy to picture! I also like the wizard version of the Hawaiian shirt - hilarious idea!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! That's just what I was going for :)

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Review #6, by RosePygmyPuff The Letter

9th October 2012:
Great first chapter! I like how Olive's parents taught them some magic before going to Hogwarts -giving them a head start. Feels exactly like something a normal wizarding family would do. Great mix of establishing intrigue and interesting characters. The end of the chapter is fantastic!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like where it's going.

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Review #7, by JJFuzzyhead The Letter

7th October 2012:
I really like your story. Is Olive older than Georgina?

Author's Response: Thanks, and yes! One year older - Georgina is 11 and Olive is 12, having already been at Hogwarts for one year.

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