i think zandra should have on a mask too or be a butterflyAuthor's Response: Thanks so much but sadly i write based on my mood and when i wrote chapter 8-10 i was very upset and TOTALLY forgot about the Halloween ball so i will say she was a butterfly and she had a great time with luna and her friends. I AM SO SORRY I FORGOT!!! But i think you will still like the story :) Report Review
Hello!! I noticed one of your reviews on my story, and I decided to come give this story a little peek. First of all, I think you have a really adorable story going here. Zandra Umbridge is a likeable enough character, but I think malfoy sounds a bit OC... So does Harry :p but your story is good, so I think you should just continue it the way it is! :) ~DracosGirl012Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I am going to try and show more of the actual Malfoy and Harry from the fifth book and movie. Maybe even using quotes from the book itself :) Report Review
Great so far! I really hated Umbridge in the books. Stupid woman. But so far, I like her daughter! :) And I'm rooting for Draco. I've got a weakness for that man. Harry is nice, but Draco is sexy. :p Good job.Author's Response: Thanks so much!! And I am also rooting for Draco as he is the most gorgeous guy I have ever imagined XD Report Review
You're a really good writer. I love it how Umbridge hasn't change much from the books as well. :)Author's Response: Oh thanks so much that means a lot! And ya that was my goal!! I hate Umbridge :) Report Review
is this the last chapter?Author's Response: No there will be a lot more :) as long as people like it :3 Report Review
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