yes this has a lot future fin to play with. years ago I went by the only bit of wall(large pillar really) between platforms 9 and 10. At that time they had so much trouble with kids running into it - the rail staff had surrounded it with cement barriers, plastic barrels, orange traffic cones, a wooden fence and streamers of plastic Caution tape.
So lets go next chapter - yeah! Report Review
This is such an interesting idea! I think it's so funny that not only does she fall through the platform, but she meets Harry at the age he was in the books! That's awesome!
I think for future chapters, you might have to address how a muggle can see everything (I expect there are muggle repelling charms and the like everywhere), but if not, I'm okay with going along with it.
Great work! Report Review
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