This story was wonderfully sweet. I loved how he was determined to get her at least kind of back to how she was and not deterred by others. This is wonderfully written and the story was great. I loved your choice of characters for this story, as you could've easily gone with someone else, such as Voldemort, where there is a more literal representation of the idea.
I'm so glad that you didn't though. I think that this story was wonderfully complex and just great. I noticed a few typos towards the end of the story. Nothing big, just some misspelled words. The one that I can easily find is moths instead of months, but like i said nothing that needs major editing, just a quick read through!
I loved this story and how you interpreted the idea of a broken soul. I also like the fact that it wasn't fully healed in the end. It great! Thank you so much for the entry!Author's Response: Thank you so much! This all means a lot to me, I really appreciate it. I really enjoyed this challenge.
~Luvshunforever Report Review
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