{reviewid: 2785925, reviewer: 'harryhermron'}
9th May 2013:
I am enjoy you story. I think a sequel would be great.
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{reviewid: 2784826, reviewer: 'Hi'}
2nd May 2013:
are you going to update soon
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{reviewid: 2783901, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
26th April 2013:
Can you please try to hurry? It's going so great. In the sequel, make it longer. And I think last of these chapters are I think engagement and stuff. The sequel shall be the marry things. I think that's a good idea. And maybe Harry and Ginny will get James now. Ron and Hermione should get Rose too.
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{reviewid: 2783704, reviewer: 'Unknown'}
24th April 2013:
This is great. Will there be more chapters?
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{reviewid: 2783349, reviewer: 'Tani'}
22nd April 2013:
The story is interesting..please continue!!
Author's Response: Don't worry, the next chapter will be up soon ;)
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{reviewid: 2782790, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
20th April 2013:
Please, I want ACTION! Gimmie that chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, there will be action! I'm starting to type it up today, but I don't know when it will be up.
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{reviewid: 2782789, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
20th April 2013:
Please, please, please get the updates coming! I always check if you updated it or not regularly now. I felt so happy when two chapters were added. Please, please, please continue.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! Its nice to know that you really like this story! And don't worry, I will continue.
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{reviewid: 2782754, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
19th April 2013:
GinnyPotter,
That was bound to happen. The lack of law enforcement and the presence of DE's still loose. It will also depend on just which DE's. I can only hope that this will end on the side of Light. You do have not only recent veterans of the Battle, but three of the most skilled Witches of that Battle. Of course now Harry, Ron and possibly Kingsley are on the way, though there will be action I can only believe that it will end well. I do hope you have the next ready for post soon.
FoM
Author's Response: I haven't started to write the next chapter yet because of my crazy schedule, but I can't wait to start on it, I have a good idea of what I want in it! I hope as well that it'll be up soon, thank you and keep on reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2782237, reviewer: 'Xray281'}
16th April 2013:
Glad to see another chapter, but it felt rushed. Don't worry about posting too soon. Remember. Quality, not quantity. When you rush, you make simple mistakes. Almost got the spacing down though. You really do seem to have a good grasp on the characters mannerisms. Enjoyed the short read. I will be patient for the next update. Ever Onward.
Author's Response: Thank you, and I probably will go back and fix it. I knew this chapter wouldn't be the best, it is sort of a filler for things to come. Thank you for reading!
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{reviewid: 2782230, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
16th April 2013:
GinnyPotter,
Other than one typo, it was just the in between chapter that was needed. You are hinting that there is another reason Harry is so sleepy. I can think of a few. But then Ron and Hermione would be too, if it was catching up the rest missed when they were on the run. I'm thinking it goes back to all the energy Harry had to expend to stay sane while part Riddle lived in his skull. Anyone else would have been insane. I did really enjoy this one. Keep it up!
FoM
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't know if this would be a good chapter, seeing as I write it half asleep! I hope you keep on reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2779424, reviewer: 'Heather%20Kay'}
2nd April 2013:
I have finished reading all the chapters so far and I think they are really good! You have a good talent for story telling :) Keep writing more I can't wait for the next chapters! Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should be up in a few days.
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{reviewid: 2779375, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
2nd April 2013:
Nice story! Keep it up!
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{reviewid: 2779370, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
2nd April 2013:
This is like an original Harry Potter book!
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{reviewid: 2779367, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
2nd April 2013:
Nice story. Couldn't wait for more!
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{reviewid: 2779365, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
2nd April 2013:
This is simply good!
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{reviewid: 2779363, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
2nd April 2013:
Why is there a cliffhanger? You do that a lot!
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{reviewid: 2779350, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
1st April 2013:
This is cool, keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 2779349, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
1st April 2013:
This is filled with action. It seems nice!
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{reviewid: 2779344, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
1st April 2013:
It's okay, I now the pressure. Right now, try not to make the next book have problems too!
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{reviewid: 2779341, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
1st April 2013:
This story is so cool!
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{reviewid: 2779340, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
1st April 2013:
The next chapter should be fun, I'll read.
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{reviewid: 2779339, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
1st April 2013:
Really fun to read. It's awesome!
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{reviewid: 2779337, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
1st April 2013:
It's so great, you could do this yourself you know!
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{reviewid: 2779336, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
1st April 2013:
Can you write a new book like this?
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{reviewid: 2779334, reviewer: 'GeminiTriton'}
1st April 2013:
Cool... It's really nice.
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