Cool story, this Anemone is intriguing. Nice way of introducing the characters.
A few grammatical errors (I'm so picky) mainly with speech marks i.e. "Hello I'm Grace" there should be a period/comma in there. Anyway.
Great work. I'd be grateful if you could read my story and leave a review? Be as ruthless as you like, I'm always up for some constructive criticism.
~Jacelyn =)Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I knew there would be some mistakes as I didn't get anyone to proof read it. Will try to improve them. Anemone is my favourite character at the minute because she has the biggest back story so far, the others have their own parts also but Anemone is the first one to hit the light.
I am attempting to plan what happens to them at the minute as it is proving to be challenging to write about four main characters each with different ways of life.
I hope you will continue to read this one when I update and please read my others. and I would love to read and review yours.
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