I like it. It's sweet, and it isn't too cliched or fluffy. I really liked the end bit about it being a real ending. At first, I had a bit of trouble following the time skipping, though. Just a thought.
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Awww... that was adorable. I love Al so much and I really got to like Say, too. It was well written and I loved the way you broke it up and yet it all flowed. And the ending was cliche, yes, but in the best possible way. Report Review
Aww, this was the cutest!
From the way they met, to the end.. I have to say I smiled goofyly throughout the whole text!
It would be so great if you do another one shot of this, where she's at the Burrows, meeting the family, since they're wizards and all that.. :) Report Review
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