4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Sunflower The Tree and the Bird and the Fish and the Bell

13th April 2014:
You really have a way with words. I'm (slowly) making my way through your stories, stopping occasionally to wail in despair and wonder at your amazing talent.

I used to hate Cho, too. Somehow, this made me like her a lot better. I suppose that was your intention, though. The ending was perfect - I found it very fitting that you didn't succumb to forcing Andrew and Cho together. Cho found her way by herself - absolutely perfect.

Well, I'll leave you with my favourite quote of the story. You have such a way with words and this blew my mind. xx

He was a bruise on her neck, she was the print of lipstick or gloss behind his ear. I never wore make-up and kissed him like I was painting on paper with water; it was her job to stain it with colour later.

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Review #2, by The Empress The Tree and the Bird and the Fish and the Bell

19th November 2012:
What a great read. Looking for something to read today I clicked on Random Story and it brought me here. I am delighted to have found this story. Random Story doesn't always bring me to such wonderful stories. Like you, I've never given Cho much thought, but this is a beautiful representation of a grossly under represented character. Gorgeous prose. In my opinion, a rather flawless narrative of a struggling young woman. Love it.

Author's Response: thank you so much! haha, yes, it can be a bit of a gamble. I used to despise cho, but as time went by I realised that I actually felt sorry for her, and this fic is part taken from real life, so writing it was both a way of trying to understand her character and things from ~the past~ (sounds more dramatic than it actually is!). again, thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

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Review #3, by strahovi The Tree and the Bird and the Fish and the Bell

28th September 2012:
this is different from what you usually write, at least i think so, but i heard you in every line. your writing is unmistakable and this is another flawless piece and i love the emotions in it. i don't think i've ever paid cho that much attention, let alone try to understand her. but from what i know about her, i think you got this perfectly. and yes, slow life.

Author's Response: thank you very much! no, I never really paid Cho much attention until recently, but I felt like I had to write her. ♥

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Review #4, by stolen The Tree and the Bird and the Fish and the Bell

26th September 2012:
this was brilliant. there was something about this one shot that really captured my attention and i love how you have written this. it's original and interesting and there's something kind of strange about it which i love.

Author's Response: thank you so much! :D ♥

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