Hi! What a nice start! I really liked the way Angelina and George greet each other in the morning--it seems so in character for them. :) To help your story, I think maybe reading over it before submitting to the queue would be nice, just to catch sneaky typos and the like. I also think it'd be neat to see if George ever does find those earrings! Great work for a first fic! Report Review
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