Hey! Siriusly89 here reviewing as requested :) This sounds like a REALLY interesting story! You gave us all sorts of tantilising details to get us hooked on the story! You sneaky devil you :P One thing I will recommend is that you go into the reason for her leaving in more detail, just seeing a couple of empty taxi's isn't really a legit reason for most people to run away, and to me Lucy seems like the type of girl who plans everything to the last detail!; The ending was VERY good, it made me want to read more, and then I saw that, for now, this is the only chapter and I was all like 'WHY???' (sadface) but that just means I can't WAIT for the next chappie :)Author's Response: thank you for reviewing :) in the next few chapters I plan to explain a bit more as to why she ran away and go through the events that lead up to her running away :) thanks again :D Report Review
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