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Review #1, by GabriellaGMW

9th December 2012:

This is good but I swear you have used exactly the same quotes that hpfangirl wrote for 'Leave it to Seamus to screw things up'... it's a good story but try not to use other people's quotes. If you like the idea then read it through and just tweak it a bit. That's my advice :)

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Review #2, by Opalpixiechick

Surprises!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5th October 2012:

Great story. :) Can't wait to read more.

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Review #3, by i freakin love malfoy

Surprises!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4th October 2012:

I like this story a lot! But it reminds me of another story i've read before.

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Review #4, by LadyOrobourus

Surprises!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4th October 2012:

I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

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Review #5, by just an fyi

Surprises!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4th October 2012:

this is almost word for word (except missing some major info) hpfangirl's story "Leave it to Seamus to screw things up"... if you adopted hp's story you really should refrence that in the author notes. I think that you leaving out most of the details in hpfangirl's story you don't do the great story idea any justice. I'm just sayin. They do say that immitation is the greatest form of flattery, but this is just 1/2 of the original.

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Review #6, by Miss.P

Surprises!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4th October 2012:

Wow what a great story! I love the idea! I can't wait until the next chapter please update soon!

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