Reading Reviews for Small Bump
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Review #1, by DobbyLover Charlie

20th December 2015:
You know when you really need to cry but you're too stubborn? And you look up depressing songs that will make you cry and you pick an Ed Sheeran song you've never heard of because, well, he's Ed Sheeran, and you play the song and you cry while you read the lyrics and the YouTube comments and then you have the inspiration of searing "Small Bump" on HPFF and now you're really a mess? And you're still unaware as why?

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Review #2, by Hats For House Elves Charlie

13th May 2014:
Its a well written sing fic but a few things that leapt out. You don't need to tell us when something is out of order. Either write it into the story or use dates as a heading. Readers will work it out. I'm not a great fan of the song fic people try too hard to get a plot directly out of the lyrics but the song choice here is brilliant. The flow still needs a little work. Since you are writing scenes out of order and in a few hundred words those few hundred words need to give a lot of context too. The idea is beautifully tragic and it could be a brilliant story with a few tweaks.

Keep writing


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