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Review #1, by Veritaserum27 The Curves Of Her Lips Rewrites History

10th July 2014:
Hi!

This is a very interesting take on the Snape/Lily/James love triangle. Or should I say love square? I never really saw Sybill and Snape together - and I guess neither did he. It makes their story a little more sad because he had a chance to love someone else and he threw it away - even though he knew he would never get Lily. This also makes Trelawny a bit vindictive. She is going to fake a prophecy to send Voldemort to Lily's house because Snape won't love her. Woah. Pretty intense. Overall, I thought this was written really well and you've conveyed their emotions very nicely. Good job with a nice twist to the story!

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Review #2, by Pretense Of Perfection The Curves Of Her Lips Rewrites History

10th July 2014:
Wow, I really like the twist you added on to the canon prophecy. Imagine if all of this were actually true, and Lily and James, and all of those other people died just because of Sybil's love for Severus? I'm in shock. I really wasn't sure about this in the beginning, but I think you did an amazing job with this one-shot. I find it incredibly ironic that Severus is so cold and hostile toward Sybil, considering that's basically his exact relationship with Lily, although it definitely makes sense in a way. He hates himself so much at times, that if she reminded him of himself, he would probably internally transfer those feelings and thus hate her as well. I think you did a wonderful job capturing Sybil as a character, she was fixated on death and darkness, while still remaining sort of whimsical and mysterious. I love the title, it fits so perfectly with the story, as it too, is sort of dark and omninous.

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pretense of perfection, gryffindor

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Review #3, by ohmymerlin The Curves Of Her Lips Rewrites History

15th October 2012:
:O

I'm running out of words to use! You're just so creative and original! (Obviously I am not.)

You are SERIOUSLY talented! Can I please just steal your talent and lock it away while patting it and whispering, "My preciousss..."?

Or is that too weird?

Anywho, I just LOVED this one-shot, I love all your stories so far! :p I'll start to review some of the longer ones soon! :D

Again you get a ten out of ten, what else would I give you?! :p

Author's Response: I'm running out of words to describe how amazing you are!!!

HAHA, i'll let you pat it once :P

Ugh, honestly you are SO amazing. You are literally making my year *lovesyouforit* thank you!!!


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Review #4, by soufflegirl99 The Curves Of Her Lips Rewrites History

14th October 2012:
Astonishingly good one shot - it is outstandingly original and one of the most intruging AND gripping ones I've ever read!
I love the fresh new idea to write about trelawney and her mind - it's both shows great signs of creativity and inventiveness (if that's a word :D)
I found it over all extremely awesome - I couldn't drag my eyes away for a second! - and you are a very talented writer!!
Well done for such a fambubblybumshus and tremendulant one shot :)
- Soph

Author's Response: Wow thank you SO much for saying that! I don't know how the idea came to my head to be honest. I have never shipped Trelawney or Severus at all, seeing as they've never interacted before so the fact that this certain plot bunny popped into my head was also a surprise! So thank the bunnies ;)

Thank YOU for such a fantastic, lovely comment! It's made me really happy :$ Hehe! Especially on this story! I was quite excited about it but it had no reviews.. until now! :D So thanks again!


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