Oh my god. The language of this fic is absolutely exquisite. I'm literally sitting here just.marvelling. There are some really stunning sentences, and as a Podcaster, I suggest you volunteer this story over at HPPC because people over there will be clawing each other to read this. Some of the sentences in this are so perfect and eye opening. The way you refer to him as a Mosaic, and your subtle references to Myths really add a lovely effect to the antsy-ness of this fic. Really, really lovely. Off to go and check whether you have a couple more fics because you have won me over with this beautifully crafted piece of art. Ah, it was so good!Author's Response: wow this review just cheered me up so much, i really have no words i'm blushing too much right now! thanks so much for the words of kindness they really mean a lot to me and i'll be sure to check out hppc :) thanks for stopping by, it really means a lot. Report Review
you could use a little more descriptiveness on the environment... but I like.
Also, I think you're missing an end bracket somewhere.Author's Response: thanks i'll be fixing it :) Report Review
A litle force was nessecary, mhm?
OMG YOU DELAYED SO LONG.
THE WORLD WAS DEPRIVED FROM YOUR SKILLS FOR SO SO LONG.
I just love your writing style. It flows so well and omg I just absolutely love it. Its kinda poetic, y'know? I absolutely love it =D The last line reall completed the chapter too- something that don't always happen.
To be free, to be wistful; she wasn’t bound by chains; she was imprisoned by a ring.
MY NAME IS IN THAT SENTENCE *couldn't resist pointing that out*
Keep on writing Grace or I'll set the Wisty monster on you.
And thank you so much for mentioning me on your AN Author's Response: EEP THE WISTY MONSTER SCARED ME INTO DOING IT XD SKILLS WHAT SKILLS? I AM FLAILING AIMLESSLY RIGHT NOW. that name was totally intentional :P thanks for the awesome review wisty! Report Review
I adore your writing Grace! It's so lovely and creates such vivid imagery and sends shivers up my spine. :3 write moar okay? < 3Author's Response: AS;LDFKJ SHERYL THANKS SO MUCH FOR BEING THE FIRST TO TELL ME IT'S ACTUALLY VALIDATED! i will write more once i get back into the swing of things, hopefully soon! Report Review
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