Excellent chapter, well done. Have her stab Ron. He's not really my most favorite character.
I read about the person who owns the wine cabinet, too. Very freaky. I saw a picture of the thing, and it just creeped me out.Author's Response: SWEAR TO GOD SAME HERE!!! ugh freaks me out! I think about that ^^ Report Review
I don't like this chapters ending, should have been longer :(
Other than that, great story.Author's Response: yea im sorry i was just trying to get it done... let me know what i should put next chap. ! :D Report Review
Nice chapter. Is it DracoxHermione? It sounds like it. That's one of my favorite couples!
It's a slow beginning, but I guess it has to be. I love how you showed the effects the box is already having on Hermione. But when will she open the box?
You should put Ron in it, because he is Hermione's friend. It would be wrong not to have him in.
Let's see. A haunting/spooky banner for this story. Hmm...Well, the movie's was "Fear the demon that doesn't fear God." You could use something like..."Dark Lords and Death Eaters will seem small in the face of this demon." I'm sorry, I'm really not sure what you could do. I'll keep thinking. That's the best one I've got so far.Author's Response: yeah next chap will have Ron, and hopefully she opens the box too! ^^ Report Review
Haha, I loved this.
I can make banners, but I use a website for it, so , yeah. You can check out some of my stories and their banners if you want. Email me at Sarahb52006 at Yahoo dot com. (If I put my email, they delete my review, so I broke it down. :P)
I LOVE THE BOOK POSSESSION. I thought it was a bit unknown though, because whenever I ask people if they heard of it, they just shake their heads. D:
Anyway... Love your idea with the story, and like where it is going!
Keep on writing!
(10/10)Author's Response: aww thanks and IMAFO we wouldn't want that!!! I didn't know they had a book on Possession that pretty cool. I'll email you soon! the thing is i forgot my password and i don't know why it isn't letting me renew it oh well... I'll check yours out! Report Review
I loved that movie, and I can just tell that this story is going to be super cool, so please update. I think it'll be interesting to see a Harry Potter version of Possession.Author's Response: oh yes I'll try to update as much as i can i'll apreciate a feedback on the summary on the Possesion.. i didn't watch it i read it on wiki, so im kinda basing it on that and maybe stuff of my own... dont know yet! Report Review
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