Hi there! I am finally here with your review!
I really enjoyed One-shot and I thought that you did a great job with it. I loved the twist that this took in having Draco be the one to deliver Rose. I liked seeing the changes in the pair of them who bonded over the little one. I also felt really sad for Draco when he reflected on his wife and how much different she was than Hermione.
I thought you did a great job showing the progression of the pair of them. I also really liked the bit about Narcissa and how Draco reflected on the war time mother that he had known, but there she sits now. It was quite heart warming.
I liked the descriptions and the way that they provided a wonderful picture in my mind as I read along. You did a wonderful job! Keep up the awesome writing!! :)
I also added this to my favorites!Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! It was very heart warming for you to not only review this as asked but to also add this to your favorites.
I love Dramione and I know that their pair is one of the terribly hard pairings to write and stay as IC as possible. I'm quite glad that you think it was okay. I tend to be OC with the two of them yet give them a background of what they've been through after all. Thank you so much! Report Review
Hello, here from the big event challenge! :)
This was a nice story, and a nice twist that it was in different people's P.O.V.
Loved how you had Hermione's characterisation spot on, stubborn and going to do what ever she needs to, to get ahead, reallly nice touch.
Great job and the results will be in a blog soon, good luck! :)Author's Response: hello!
thank you very much for prompting this challenge, though, quite honestly, I've been thinking this scene for ages as part of my other story. Thank you for picking it too! Thank you so much! Report Review
you need to keep going with this story...iy waill be a hit..good luckAuthor's Response: awww, thank you... but I'm continuing this story, only it's part of another story, More than Meets the Eye, which unfortunately, I hadn't had the time updating yet. But thank you! Report Review
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