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Review #1, by Ms Michelle Radcliffe The Yellow Box

1st October 2012:
oh. wonder what dumbledore has in plan for the accidental unbreakable vow. i wonder if only magical people were able to see the scars on hermiones hand, but then wouldnt she have noticed the scars once she went to hogwarts adn not 8 years later when the letter came...unless dumbledore did something?

Author's Response: Terrific that you have spent the time to Review.
I have three more chapter for this coming
I hope to explain how Dumbledore was able to hide the scars from the unbreakable vow until the kids get back together.

hint: Hermione didn't promise, Elroy did.

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Review #2, by Ms Michelle Radcliffe The letter

1st October 2012:
dun. dun. dun.hermione is engaged at age 11. if the grangers forgot about elroy and his parents for 8 years, then elroy and hermione must not have stayed in contact.

Author's Response: I hope the story has answered your questions

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