Reading Reviews for The Corners of My Mind
8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by OhMyMerlin46 Changes

26th July 2013:
I really enjoyed this chapter- the Marauders are conveyed brilliantly and each has their own individual personality- none of it's cliche or anything irritating like that either, which is always a bonus. So well done! :)

I'm also looking forward to getting to know Lyra, Lily and Capella and witnessing one of Capella's rants...? I was laughing like a mad thing when I read that, though I have no idea why. My strange sense of humour, I suppose.

Anyway, brilliant and please keep on going! :)

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Review #2, by SiriusGal Changes

21st May 2013:
Awww Sirius!! I also really like that we follow Remus through this story, at least for right now, because he is greatly portrayed. Update soon please!

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Review #3, by SiriusGal Chapter 2: From Me to You

21st May 2013:
Your dialogue is so great!

Author's Response: Aw shucks, you're too kind. ;)

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Review #4, by SiriusGal Chapter 1: Make a Memory

21st May 2013:
Wow, I really liked your descriptions of the Marauders, so well written and right on the dot :)

Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot! :)

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Review #5, by Kristina1990 Chapter 2: From Me to You

28th February 2013:
Well written first two chapters!
Hope to be reading more from you soon :).

Author's Response: And I hope for you to be reading more soon also... ;)

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Review #6, by WoodenFences Chapter 1: Make a Memory

24th February 2013:
The second to last paragraph intrigued me, "A Marauder was sent one of these during their last year, but not for the reasons that they thought, or just didn't want to admit." oooh!!! *mystery*...

Author's Response: I like that I've left you with mystery, it makes me feel as if I've done what I meant to...

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Review #7, by Corleone Chapter 2: From Me to You

24th February 2013:
great so far update soon though!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try to! :)

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Review #8, by OhMyMerlin46 Chapter 1: Make a Memory

7th October 2012:
Pretty snazzy so far, and I'm intrigued to see where this goes...

I noticed the occasional typo and missing-word, but you're human too- or, at least, I think you are- so no worries on that front. ;)

Update soon!

Author's Response: I know, I'm going to edit the chapters soon - sorry for the odd mistake, hope it was bearable! Thanks for R/R!

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