Awww Sirius!! I also really like that we follow Remus through this story, at least for right now, because he is greatly portrayed. Update soon please! Report Review
Your dialogue is so great!Author's Response: Aw shucks, you're too kind. ;) Report Review
Wow, I really liked your descriptions of the Marauders, so well written and right on the dot :)Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot! :) Report Review
Well written first two chapters!
Hope to be reading more from you soon :).Author's Response: And I hope for you to be reading more soon also... ;) Report Review
The second to last paragraph intrigued me, "A Marauder was sent one of these during their last year, but not for the reasons that they thought, or just didn't want to admit." oooh!!! *mystery*...Author's Response: I like that I've left you with mystery, it makes me feel as if I've done what I meant to... Report Review
great so far update soon though!Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try to! :) Report Review
Pretty snazzy so far, and I'm intrigued to see where this goes...
I noticed the occasional typo and missing-word, but you're human too- or, at least, I think you are- so no worries on that front. ;)
Update soon!Author's Response: I know, I'm going to edit the chapters soon - sorry for the odd mistake, hope it was bearable! Thanks for R/R! Report Review
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