this was absolutely brilliant. you are an amazing writer, and this was such a great story--i really enjoyed reading it!
~M Report Review
Great story! Please continue writing! I can't wait to read on :) Report Review
Hello there! I'm finally here to review your wonderful entry!
This story is simply beautiful.
You took my little challenge and made something wonderful and complex, something that sounds almost canon.
I LOVE how you worked the mirror of erised into this, how Gwendolyn, despite being downtrodden and bullied, is happy.
That's such a powerful thing, and it makes her have so much more depth and strength as a character.
The confrontation scene was wonderful.
As I noticed with your other story, you have a real knack for conclusions. You always seem to have the perfect words to finish a story, and for that I envy you.
The story is well written, but I did find a few spelling/grammatical errors, so you could check that out.
All in all, a well deserving winner and a beautiful story!
~Gill Report Review
ok well i never imagined helena ravenclaw to be that umm well b*y but i definatly can seeit now. she is definatlny the spoiled brat type. um as for gwen i think she was a good character but i am kind of confused on how she is tied in. liike is she suppost to bethe reaal daughter of ravenclaw? whateves i liked it anywway good job :) Report Review
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