Excellent story! It flows nicely, and I'll add to my favorites so I know when you update! A few mistakes here and there, mostly spelling and grammar, but I love this-it relates to the plot I've been planning for a while. I also love the idea of Harry having another love interest- and you display the character's personalities beautifully! Love it, and 9/10!Author's Response: Hi!
Thank you so much for reviewing, I was thinking this plot up for a while ever since DH, but I've just never had the courage to write it and post it on HPFF. I usually stick to making banners, so I'm really glad it's going ok.
I was thinking of looking for a beta to tidy things up a bit, so I hope my spelling/grammar is not to terrible. :D
It always makes my day to hear from readers, and I'm really glad you're enjoying my fic so far. Hopefully my next chapter will be up soon.
~ Gemma xx
The characters are very canon - I think it's working very well! I am very pleased I came across this story as I have thoroughly enjoyed it - it's a brilliant read!
The storyline is well played out with a fantastic portrayal of Harry's emotions/thoughts and a realistic view of what it could be like if he went back to hogwarts :)
I'd just suggest to make it 100% better out of 95%, to look back and set the scene a bit.
That's the only thing I think you need to work on - other than that it's tiptoparooney! Well done :DAuthor's Response: Hi!
Thank you so much for your suggestion, I was really worrying my story wasn't working very well so I really appreciate your review. I'll have a little look and see what I can do to work things a little better. :)
Thank you for taking the time to review and I'm really pleased your enjoying it xx :D
Loving this story so far! Update soon please! Author's Response: Hi, thank you! I'm really glad your liking it so far,
hopefully new chapter up soon xx Report Review
Omgee write more!! & I wanna see Ginny and Harry get back together (:Author's Response: Hi, thank you for reviewing, I'm glad your enjoying this so far, hopefully my next chapter will be up soon! x Report Review
It sounds feasible. It has the possibility of being either a love triangle, a tragedy, or even a comedy(maybe a little dark comedy). Update soon.Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I've never written an OC, I've always written one-shots before (and have never posted any) so I was pretty nervous.
Thank you for reviewing, my next chapter is waiting for validation :)
~ Gemma x
i see you stayed close to canon with the story so far, or at least are planning to bridge your story from canon. I am interested in what is happening between Harry and Ginny.Author's Response:
Yes I'm trying to keep quite canon, although I think my characters and plots go a bit astray a bit later in my story! ;) Thank you for leaving a review, I hope your enjoying reading.
~ Gemma x
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