Reading Reviews for The Third War
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Review #1, by GinnyWeasley76 Say The Word

9th December 2012:
I am liking the story, but I think it would be really improved if you could add a little more detail to each chapter. Tell us about their lives and what they're used to. Good job so far and I look forward to reading more

Author's Response: Ahha thanks, I know I need more detail and I'm gonna work on it :P

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Review #2, by Bones Mr Horeson's Woes

17th November 2012:
Very descriptive and sets the scene very clearly. Looking forward to reading the rest.

Author's Response: Thank-you :)

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Review #3, by Wickedlovely01 The Very Short Hogwarts Express Journey

12th November 2012:
Hello there!
Ok so this has potential but I think it needs more detail. This is something I have to work on as well, because like you, I like fast paced stories so I focus more on the plot more than the detail. I really like how they actually care about the kids on the train, but how did Voldemort or whoever killed those people get on the train?

Author's Response: Wow! My first reveiw in like.. ages! Anyway, I know there isn't much detail, but I'm working on it :P I didn't want it to be slow either so I didn't want to drag it out with the detail. And about Voldemort... You'll see. Sorry I'm taking so long to put more chapters on here. Been really busy lately, but I'm going to soon! :D

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Review #4, by Marauder_Weasley The Very Short Hogwarts Express Journey

17th September 2012:
bloody hell is old voldypants alive

Author's Response: You'll see for yourself in due course ;)

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Review #5, by Marauder_Weasley Mr Horeson's Woes

15th September 2012:
it seems like a promising story

Author's Response: Wow! Thank-you so much! My first review! I can't actually tell you how happy I am right now :D

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