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Reading Reviews for Severus Snape's Daughter
  
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Review #1, by RomioneWriter The beginning of what exactly?!

6th September 2012:
Just read your story! :) It's quite good and I love the idea you have used! I would, however, suggest that you read over your writing and bit and fix a couple mistakes. Also, for easier reading, put each line of dialogue on a separate line as it would be easier to follow. Other then that it's intriguing and with a few tweaks I expect that this story could go quite far! :) It's very different which is a good thing! :D

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