A nice start to what seems to be like a great story. Noticed a few small errors while reading but not enough to be annoying. Keep up the good work, looking forward to seeing more. Report Review
I saw this on the forum and I've got to say I love it. Normally I don't read Harry's stories after DH but from the first sentence in the first chapter I was hooked.
Love it and keep updating.
Laura (A fellow Gryffindor)Author's Response: Thank you very much, currently working on the 5th will be here soon :) Report Review
Huh, the private message thing isn't working. :p
Great chapter by the way! Very heartfelt.Author's Response: oh dear I'll try message you and thank you! Report Review
Nice story so far! keep it coming. And just for the record, it's Kingsley not Kinsley! :)Author's Response: Arghh! Yes it is, I really need to edit the grammar, I get excited I've finished writing and publish too soon! But thank you, next chapter will hopefully be soon! Report Review
Great story,close to JK,but with your touch.Keep writing.Author's Response: thank you very much, don't worry I've got 6 and 7 written so should be soon! Report Review
I loved how you described the feelings that were going through Harry's head, and the beginning.
You do, however, have many grammar mistakes and a few others as well. I would suggest looking into finding a beta, or, if you would like, I could help with that.
Good start though, and I cannot wait to read the rest!Author's Response: Thanks for you're views, yes I do need a beta, I often write large portions or finish it off late at night and can't spot the mistakes till it's already out there, private message me about beta?
Thank you! Report Review
Oh my God this is a amazing story the best i have ever read i can't belive it! Its so descriptive and very very entertaing! you should start making a novel on harry and ginny and send it in!! You are such a good author i beg you to write mor and Publish it please, i beg you!!!Author's Response: Thank you Katie that is really kind, I'm already writing the third so I hope you'll like it Report Review
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