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Review #1, by ginny The World Beyond The Glass

27th March 2013:
Oh do keep writing...I CAN'T WAIT!

Author's Response: Thankk you :) x

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Review #2, by Elleinad The World Beyond The Glass

9th March 2013:
Oh my gosh! I feel so special! I'm really loving this story. This chapter was a bit slow but it seems unavoidable. I think you could have smoothed the interview out more. The catchphrase was thrown in a bit bluntly. Also, I think it would have been more dramatic if you had those two not be able to kill each other in the arena rather than having it decided and discussed beforehand. Other than that this was amazing! I love what you're doing with Draco and Hermione. For example, the way you had Hermione basically repeat what Draco said when they were talking about relationships.
Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank youuu :)
Hmm I know what you mean but it's okay I guess :P I don't have much time to write anymore so I just do what I can to the best of my abilities and send it in and hope for the best!
See you in the next chapter xx


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Review #3, by MadiMalfoy The World Beyond The Glass

2nd March 2013:
Fantastic as always! :D I'm just thinking in my head, parallel, parallel, parallel! I can tell where things happened in THG and how you changed them for HP! An idea I have for you is to kind of make everyone get paired off, kind of like in districts--have it be random selection though so people from other schools can be paired with others. But don't have Draco & Hermione be paired together, as that's just too obvious and cliche. Like in THG, Peeta goes with the Careers and Katniss pairs up with Rue, you could do something like that w/Hermione & Calyx and then Draco would be with all of the purebloods. Just a thought I had :) Phenomenal writing, keep it up! xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D Yep, already thought of it haha though a tad bit differently ;)
Not pairing them up from the beginning- it's not something Draco and Hermione would have done.
Thank you again and see you next chapter! xx


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Review #4, by Trish a fan The World Beyond The Glass

28th February 2013:
Great story, i loke it, try to be more original, and you can still include dramione mooments in there like in the hunger games, even if its a spurr of the moment thing. Katniss and Petta made people believe they were in love, and Draco and Hermione do need sponcers.. You're a great writer Felton Lewis, i'm proud to be your reader!

Author's Response: Thank you (: Ill be inputting my own things soon as well so keep reading!

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Review #5, by MsJacksonMalfoyMellark The World Beyond The Glass

28th February 2013:
Oh my god! THIS CHAPTER WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME! I LOVED IT TO BITS! ^_^ I really liked the way you you stuck, in your own way, to the book/film. It's a really brilliant fanfic of it, I have to say! I loved the part when Hermione spins, she seems like she's floating in the air; really cool. Also, when Jeremiah asked Draco if he had any tricks up his sleeves, and then he says, "No, that's just Granger for you.". Also, the part when Hermione and Draco are staring out of that window, and when they are talking. There a little Dramione moment there; a little one. I now, cannot wait to read about the actual games. Now, that, I'm pretty sure, will be truly amazing! ^_^ Update soon!


MsJacksonMalfoyMellark

Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you :D Ahh I loved writing this chapter because i finally brought in Dramione a bit :') see you next chapter!

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Review #6, by falling in love The World Beyond The Glass

26th February 2013:
Oooh this is so good
I like the conversations hermione and Draco have:)
It's so sad about the twins though :(
But this was an amazing chapter
good job:)
-shelli

Author's Response: Thank youuu :) Ill be updating soon hopefully but She's the devil will come first :D

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Review #7, by Lady in Red The World Beyond The Glass

26th February 2013:
This is my favorite story! I always look forward to your
updates.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #8, by Dramione_4_ever The World Beyond The Glass

26th February 2013:
Ok, first off, thank you SO much for not making Draco and Hermione star-crossed lovers like in the Hunger Games. Though that has to be my favorite part of the series, it would make the story lose its integrity because it's so hard to see happening right now. Rather, I LOVE the way you have them with each other now. I think you're building a very interesting world and story. One bit of nitpicking: it may just be me, but I CANNOT see any HP character refer to two people as being "an item". Might just be me though. All in all, it's wonderful, I love how you have so many other characters too and I can't wait for "She's the Devil"! :) I'm very excited for everything to come!

Author's Response: Hahaha thank youuu :) And hmm, good point :P Might change that if i remember!
Yess, ill be uploading soon! Thanks again ;) x


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Review #9, by MsJacksonMalfoyMellark I Promise

15th February 2013:
This was yet another great chapter! I loved the catchphrase Hermione was given, 'The Girl Against Gravity'. It's really good! Also, the friendship between Charley and Hermione. Great work so far with this story. I hope you update soon! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you again and I will be updating soon! Sending it in right now ;) x

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Review #10, by MsJacksonMalfoyMellark Bloodlust

15th February 2013:
I really like the whole thing about the Death Eaters taking over and holding a game called Bloodlust. I also liked the ending of this, how all the students raised their wands to show their respect to the eight tributes chosen. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D

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Review #11, by MadiMalfoy I Promise

14th February 2013:
Ahhh every time I see something I recognize I go like HUNGER GAMES OMG! You wrote this as a parallel to such an extent that I can almost just replace the characters and get rid of magic and it's the actual Hunger Games. Fantastic, I'm excited to see where you go with this and how you develop Draco & Hermione's relationship. Yay, good job!! :) xx

Author's Response: THANK YOU (: Im glad you're happy that i did a parallel because some people think I should be more original but I like drawing direct comparisons because the HG people will enjoy it too then!
Thanks again and next chapter should be up soon ;) xx


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Review #12, by Chaserholly I Promise

14th February 2013:
Wow.. I think you did brilliantly.. Usually i never liked crossover, but this one is an exception! I love hunger games and i love harry potter and you've compiled them together in an awesome way!!! Keep it up and write more pleassse.. I'll be waiting especially with your TOR is done i have no story to wait for now hahahaha.. Thanks for writing this!!! Cant wait for next chapters! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D Ill be posting in my new BL chapter today and then once that's out, Ill send in my new story's first chapter ;) xx

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Review #13, by HuffGriffSlyRaven I Promise

8th February 2013:
I love it! Please, please, please (I'm on my knees) write more!

Author's Response: Haha it takes time to write this story's chapter- it's proving to be more challenging than my other stories actually so it might take a bit of time but ill have it up as soon as possible! Thank youu :) x

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Review #14, by HuffGriffSlyRaven Bloodlust

8th February 2013:
So heart wrenching! I am so impressed by your story. It is just the right balance between two great stories, I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please write more!

Author's Response: Thank you so so much (: x

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Review #15, by stacey Bloodlust

5th February 2013:
AMAZING! xx I absolutely loved it!! xx

Author's Response: THANK YOUUU xx

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Review #16, by Elleinad I Promise

4th February 2013:
Oh Merlin! That was wonderful! I like how you keep using Hunger Games elements in a brand new way! Charley? Love him! And I love the girl against gravity thing! I think you should turn the sponsor stuff into more of a betting thing for purebloods though. It would make a lot more sense in this context because no one would really sponsor the mudblood. Or at least, no one with money. But they would however bet on her. Because its no magic and the purebloods are kind of screwed. I loved it but I think that change would be a big improvement.

Author's Response: Thank you so much (: YAYY FOR CHARLIE I LOVE HIM TOOO
That is actually such a good idea. I think I'm going to do it and credit you of course but thank you :D
xx


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Review #17, by Amia I Promise

3rd February 2013:
Xftgyhjjjnuvtffddsdcfgbjk

YOU MUST WRITE MOAR!

Author's Response: I WILL THANK YOUUU :D

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Review #18, by falling in love I Promise

3rd February 2013:
That was an amaazing chapter!
I loved the part about the shoes!
I CANT WAIT to see more dramione action :))
good job!
-shelli

Author's Response: Thank youu :D
Ill be updating as soon as I can though I need to finish TOR first ;) x


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Review #19, by UndercoverFan I Promise

3rd February 2013:
Well, what can I say? What is there to say?

Like I said with my first review, I am 9 times out of 10 not a fan of crossovers. Whether it be that I don't understand the other half, or it's not believable, or both, most crossovers just don't do it for me.

But this.this.crossover.it floats my boat. It creams my bagel, it's chocolate sprinkles on my vanilla ice cream. It tickles my pickle, it's the gas to my car. Words like "fantastic" and "awesome" and "fabulous" and "epic" do you nor this fanfic any justice. It's.awfantabulouspic(awsome/fantastic/fabulous/epic).

I've read your other work, TOR, EHFAR, THS, TRTL and all those are just simly awfantabulouspic as well.

And honestly, I despise you for not having everything finished(TOR/Bloodlust) because I want to know EVERYTHING in these stories, but I love you for writing them and coming up with them. If I could, I'd pay you to just spend all your time writing these stories. Well I could probably afford to pay you but we most likely live nowhere near each other. Sad face. :(

So that's just about all I can say.I really hope to see more updated chapters and soon for Bloodlust and TOR.

I love you and your work. :D

10/10(but really it's like 10/10).

Author's Response: Wow. This set of reviews Ive got today are blowing my mind and making me so unbelievably happy! Thank you so so much omg. Seriously. Your reviews make so so happy and make me want to ONLY write fan fiction haha

You never know- we might be living in the same town but not knowing it ;) Thank you so much again, you're brilliant :') xx


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Review #20, by Dramione_4_ever I Promise

2nd February 2013:
XGLDLEODOSUAIRGLSIRQITSTOAIRSTO JK Rowling and Suzanne Collins would be so pleased with/proud of this! It's so amazing! It's hard to think that this is a crossover of conflicting universes because everything works so perfectly. I LOVELOVELOVE the direction thus is taking and can't wait until the next update!

Author's Response: THANK YOU :') That means a great deal to me! Thank youu again xx

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Review #21, by SydneyBlack I Promise

2nd February 2013:
Darn you!
I cried.
Again.

Bloody Hell, what's wrong with me?

I had to listen to my favourite song (We are going to be friends, the White Stripes), just so I would cheer up a bit, and not start bawling my bloody eyes out!!
1000/1000
May I have some more, sir? Please, Sir?

Author's Response: Awww sorry
Thank you though! Haha ill be updating as soon as I complete one of my stories and finish up the next chapter (: xx


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Review #22, by SydneyBlack Bloodlust

2nd February 2013:
I just cried!
On the first chapter too!
I didn't cry when I read the Reaping in the Hunger Games, so why did I just start crying to a fanfiction?
Maybe because I have more of an emotional attachment to the characters in Harry Potter?
Yeah, that's it.

Amazing job!
100/100 :']

Author's Response: Omggg I can't believe it- that means so much to me thank you so much haha (: x

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Review #23, by Tag Bloodlust

20th January 2013:
Love it!!! write a sequal please!

Author's Response: Ill be going ahead and doing the second chapter right now! :)

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Review #24, by UndercoverFan Bloodlust

18th January 2013:
I usually don't like cross overs, but you HAVE to frickin continue this story!!! YOU HAVE TO. PLEASE FREAKIN FINISH THIS. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! 1000/1000!

Author's Response: Hhahahha THANK YOU
I haven't been able to write for this for so long now but I will work on it RIGHT NOW ;)


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Review #25, by MadiMalfoy Bloodlust

16th December 2012:
Hello again! This was wonderful! The parallel to THG was great! Extend this please! I want more!!! :) happy holidays! :)

Author's Response: Hey there! thank you so much! (: Im working mainly on the other two but now that you've asked, I shall try my best to get on with this story :) x Happy holidays!

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