I love the idea behind this. Sure we knew that people were getting killed everywhere and people were running away from their homes but I suppose we (well I didn't anyway) never really think about how much it would have affected these people and really how it affected them, and I would never have thought about it without this.
I also love how this stems from such a simple thing - just a little letter with a few words - but it means so much and it can make such a difference to someone's life...her life.
Amy I love love love the way you described her death! The way it's not gruesome or even very descriptive but we can still tell how Levi had lost everything and how she knew what was going to happen and she just had to accept it, and the way you wrote her getting hit by the curse was so effective and basically that last little paragraph is my favourite part and sorry for this incredibly long run-on sentence :P
So from that I definitely liked the pov change, because we really got to feel exactly as she did, as it was happening to her.
Wow so sorry most of this is a rambling mess (and may not make sense) but anyway fab story, I loved it! ♥ Report Review
That was soo good! Thank you sooo much for writing this because it was AMAZING. Keep it up :)
-LilyLuna xxAuthor's Response: Aww, thank you so much! And thank you for the review! Report Review
AMEZ. Can you just write all the things all the time? Pretty please? *love writing* *and wifey of course :P*
You kept me in suspense until the very end, and even that kept my mind running with questions. I really got to know Levi in the short time she was there, which is quite a feat. Known characters are difficult to capture, but the only background really given was the OotP, but I still had a brilliant image of her and it all felt very real. (Run-on sentence problem? Don't know what you're talking about.)
I did notice that you switched from third person to first person at the end. I don't know whether it was on purpose and artistic or justa slip, but if it was a slip, I figured I should mention it. I also can't think of any other cc and feel like I should say something useful! :P
Annie is quite fond of late night writing sessions, so she can't wait for mooore! :D *poke poke* :P
(h) AnnieAuthor's Response: ANNIE! ALL the things? *loves you too*
The switch was intentional! I was playing around with switching tenses since I felt that the two bits of the story would be better in the different tenses. I probably should have made that more clear and I've added it into the AN!
Hopefully I'll have another one soon!!
Thank you for the review!! (h) Report Review
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