Firstly, let me say that that story was beautifully written. Your choice of words, the way you began and ended with the same thought, and the complete serene simplicity of it all was just brilliant. You strung words together in a lasso and tugged my heart so tightly that I began crying when I thought of these two and what fate had in store for them, that they would never truly get to know their son. You made Alice and Frank completely real for me. I don't need a thirty some chapter story to convince me that they belonged together, for you did it perfectly in less than a thousand words. Thank you. Report Review
That was so sweet! I love it! Very well written and lyrical without being overdone. Nice job! Report Review
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