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Review #1, by Suitschick18 SUPERMEGAFOXYAWESOMEHOT

30th August 2012:
Well, you have to have commas because while I'm reading it, I keep going on and I have to correct everything on my mind while reading it. That's the only thing you lack about but all in all its all good, and i wanna see more of Jessica and Draco. Seamus looks creepy.

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