Haha! I wonder what would happen if Albus got tumblr? The internet might just explode!Author's Response: Very true! And thank you by the way:) Report Review
Hi! Wanted you to know that I DID favourite this and am now reviewing it, as requested! Haha! This seems like a lot of fun, actually. The banter is funny and cool and don't worry about the plot - sometimes you don't need it! Anyways, moving on to the next chapter now... Report Review
I loved this! It was funny but not forced. I love the idea of a radio show for the Wotters! And im guessing that something might happen between Albus and Jess...maybe :P Keep on writing por favor :DAuthor's Response: Thankyou!:') And I shall, ahaha;) Report Review
So far so good. I can feel the chaotic.
I know you want to make it "sound" like we're listening to the radio, but I think will be better if you put some description about what are they doing, or where they were, or their expression, even who said it.
I know it's just a prologue so I can't make this first chapter as a base if your entire chapter.
Anyway, so far so good. And can't wait to read the next chapter.Author's Response: Thankyou!:') And yeah, this is an uncommon kind of chapter- that's why I envisioned it as a prologue. I may edit it in future but the next ones are going to not really be like this much:) Report Review
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