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Review #1, by 800 words of heaven Monday Morning: All About Al

5th October 2012:
Haha! I wonder what would happen if Albus got tumblr? The internet might just explode!

Author's Response: Very true! And thank you by the way:)

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Review #2, by 800 words of heaven The Chapter that is somewhat of a Prologue

5th October 2012:
Hi! Wanted you to know that I DID favourite this and am now reviewing it, as requested! Haha! This seems like a lot of fun, actually. The banter is funny and cool and don't worry about the plot - sometimes you don't need it! Anyways, moving on to the next chapter now...

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Review #3, by hpsauce Monday Morning: All About Al

16th September 2012:
I loved this! It was funny but not forced. I love the idea of a radio show for the Wotters! And im guessing that something might happen between Albus and Jess...maybe :P Keep on writing por favor :D

Author's Response: Thankyou!:') And I shall, ahaha;)

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Review #4, by Caroline The Chapter that is somewhat of a Prologue

5th September 2012:
So far so good. I can feel the chaotic.

I know you want to make it "sound" like we're listening to the radio, but I think will be better if you put some description about what are they doing, or where they were, or their expression, even who said it.

I know it's just a prologue so I can't make this first chapter as a base if your entire chapter.

Anyway, so far so good. And can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thankyou!:') And yeah, this is an uncommon kind of chapter- that's why I envisioned it as a prologue. I may edit it in future but the next ones are going to not really be like this much:)

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