This was quite short, but I really liked it. Lily had a strong character, and you explained her motives to going into the Pensive fairly well. I liked the backwards thing- starting with the detention. I would have liked to know a bit more about the memory- whose it was, exactly what was happening, how it got to the Pensive.
Thanks for writing for my challenge, I really liked this short story :)Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :D
About the memory, (whose it was, etc.) my angle on that was that Lily didn't really know that either, she just knew that she was looking for the Pensive and she knew what it did. She kind of figured out what was going on as she went along. Report Review
Daw, I'm sad this is a one-shot. Tom Riddle is a creepy kid. Lily is curious but with parents and grandparents like that it's not much of a surprise. Good job - adding this to my favourites :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks for reviewing, too! Report Review
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