I love the idea of your story a LOT and I think it could be amazing,if only you got a beta or something and spiced it up a bit?
Just my frank opinion,sorrry; but it really is a good plot ! x

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm currently looking for a Beta, and if there is anyone you would recommend, please tell me. Thanks for the review, chapter eight will be up shortly :P
~ Macy x

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i like j+j dom and fred are made for ach other. i ove this so hurry up and write more!
luv bethany

Author's Response: Ummm, Dom and Fred are cousins so I don't know how that would work...
but thanks for the review, and maybe you could check out my other story, #TheTruthBehindTheFreckles, I think you'd enjoy it!
Thanks again,
~ Macy x

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I really love your story.
I really do.
And thanks for reviewing mine.
=^.^=
meow.
(Oh, comment on your review: I don't know how to make a banner.)
~Ems~

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! Next chapter in the queue now! As I said, check out TheDarkArts(.net) and make yourself an account. Its quick, easy and free . Go on hpff banners and click "Complete Rule Guide and Review Form" it'll explain everything there.
Thanks again
~Macy x

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I like the plot of your story but you really need to go into depth to take your story to the next level. Maybe, tone down the drama and build up your characters especially the original characters like Ciara Green and Jessia Greyback. Show us information about their past, what they are like by themselves or what they think. Though don't get me wrong I think you are doing a great job and I am intrigued to see where you are going to take this story.
Happy writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have a chapter in the queue that has a back story to Jessia.
Thanks again, and please continue reading.
~Macy x

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I like it. Good story.




Jk I freakin love this story! Update with hast! I really don't like cliff hangers :( lol

Author's Response: Haha lolz I have the fifth chapter in the queue so will probz be up by monday thanks 4 reviewing and just 2 let u no the next chapter has the return of Ciara Green, Jessia's bully :( xx
Thanks again,
~Macy x

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Hi there! I just started reading and I love the story so much! It's the best I've read in ages and the plot is really great. Ypur writing is really good too and brings out all the emotions in the story really well. Keep up the amazing work and update soon because i can't wait to read on! Your story will be fantastic, i can feel it in my bones. (and trust me, cause I've got an O in Divination :p )

9.5/10

Author's Response: Thank you ! I haven't had a review that is so nice before! I'll add another chapter by monday
Thanks again x

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I like it. Good story.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, will add another chapter soon x

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PLZ ADD MORE DETAIL!

Author's Response: Will do, thanks for reviewing

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Love the werewolf factor!!! But there's a LOT of going back and fourth between characters...:

Author's Response: Thanks for review I will tone the character changes down

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I think this story has potential. Even though you might want to give your characters more depth and tone down the drama a bit. Still, I think the idea is rather good and thank you for sharing this story with us. :)

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I love it! I think it's interesting and I look forward to seeing more!(:

~Claire

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Intresting beginning to the story, I'm intrigued to see where you are going to take this story.

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You know I never liked James Potter Sr (Snape/Lilly shipper here) .the JPII here is a bit of a mystery. He has a bit of his grandfather's bully judgmental ways.but it looks like second thoughts are kicking in finally. Nice start so far.

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I really like it so far!! Please when you make the next chapter make it longer!!! and um good job :)

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