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Review #1, by Dominique2012 Evil schemes.

12th January 2013:
This is good so far! I didn't see any mistakes at all so that's good (: The only thing I would love if the chapters were longer; but you don't have to. Sam kinda reminds me of my best friend but at the same time..not really..I mean, my friend Daniella is like..really nice but if she was hit in the nose by something (Let's say a baseball bat;) since that has happen before and she gotten so angry (Git broke my friends nose and gave her an concussion (I suck at spelling; I think I spell it write) and didn't even apologize so she punch him) he clearly said 'She deserve it, she was in my way' when he was the one who walk over to her. Anyways, I have no idea where I'm going with this lol but yeah, love your story (: Can't wait for more! 10/10

Author's Response: We hope Sam gets a bit more feisty soon. lets keep our fingers crossed.

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