{reviewid: 2788244, reviewer: 'miluv'}
22nd May 2013:
his mum has cancer doesn't she? aw:(
update (for real) soon!! love this and you:)
Author's Response: Aww you're such a sweetie! I love you too ^.^
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{reviewid: 2785388, reviewer: 'Lululaaa'}
6th May 2013:
Ah may zing. I love this so much! Can't wait til you update.
Malfoy's mum was an interesting twist - why is she in a muggle hospice?
I wonder how Hermione will react to getting answers.
Author's Response: Aw wow thanks so much!
She's dying of a currently-unknown-by-Hermione sickness. Reasons why she's in a muggle hospice and not a wizarding one will be apparent soon!
Thanks heaps for your review, more chapters to come soon!
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{reviewid: 2778217, reviewer: 'Dramione%20%3C3'}
26th March 2013:
I really like this so far :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aww thanks very much! Next chapter will be up soonish. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2777790, reviewer: 'Just%20Another%20Harry%20Potter%20Fan'}
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24th March 2013:
Please,PLEASE write more! I am literally begging! I loved this more than you could imagine! It was great!
Author's Response: Wow thanks so much! You're lovely
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{reviewid: 2777789, reviewer: 'Just%20Another%20Harry%20Potter%20Fan'}
| Review #5, by Just Another Harry Potter Fan | Detention |
24th March 2013:
Please,PLEASE write more! I am literally begging! I loved this more than you could imagine! It was great!
Author's Response: Wow thanks so much! You're lovely
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{reviewid: 2777537, reviewer: 'Just%20Another%20Harry%20Potter%20Fan'}
22nd March 2013:
That was AMAZING! Excuse me, but, I have to read on...
Author's Response: Wow thanks very much! I'm glad to hear it.
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{reviewid: 2777413, reviewer: 'Lady%20in%20Red'}
22nd March 2013:
I seriously hope Hermione chooses Draco. Anyway, great job! You are very talented!
Author's Response: Even though I know what happens, I'm actually in two minds about who she should choose!
Thanks very much for your lovely review, and I hope you keep reading.
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{reviewid: 2773286, reviewer: 'GINNYWEASLEY_HARRYPOTTER'}
28th February 2013:
oh please update soon! im hooked!
Author's Response: Hello :-) I'll update very soon! Thanks so much for reading and for the lovely review
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{reviewid: 2772526, reviewer: 'Hogwartsishome'}
24th February 2013:
Great once again! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I love that you've reviewed every chapter, it's super appreciated. I've already written the next chapter, but I just need to wait until a chapter from another story is validated first.
Thanks for taking so much time out of your day, and I hope you keep reading later on! :)
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{reviewid: 2772524, reviewer: 'Hogwartsishome'}
24th February 2013:
I love it! The characterisation and plot line is so good and I can't wait to read on!
Author's Response: Ahh thank you!!!
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{reviewid: 2772521, reviewer: 'Hogwartsishome'}
24th February 2013:
It's getting so good, can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Hehe yay! :)
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{reviewid: 2772486, reviewer: 'Hogwartsishome'}
24th February 2013:
I'm enjoying the story and I like how you've characterised Hermione and Malfoy, I think you've done it well.
Author's Response: Thank you yet again :) the first few chapters are always a bit difficult to nail important character interaction. I'm glad you think I'm doing alright.
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{reviewid: 2772484, reviewer: 'Hogwartsishome'}
24th February 2013:
I've got to say you've got a really interesting concept and I can't wait to see where it leads!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love Dramiones but so many are becoming generic and cliched. So hopefully this will be a Dramione with a twist.
Thank you for reviewing again!
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{reviewid: 2772481, reviewer: 'Hogwartsishome'}
24th February 2013:
Love this first chapter, reminds me very much of The Vow. I think the interactions between characters are spot on and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Now you've said that, I can totally see a (very unintended) resemblance! I love that bit of the movie - she's really confused and scared and lonely. I'm flattered that you're making a comparison.
Thanks so much for your lovely review, I'm really glad you like the story so far.
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{reviewid: 2771698, reviewer: 'Looove'}
20th February 2013:
Ahh more Draco, awesome! I can't believe how amazing this story is, you're super talented. Her poor parents, I hope they get there memory back
Author's Response: Aww thank you very much. You'll just have to wait and see in regards to her parents!
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{reviewid: 2771697, reviewer: 'Looove'}
20th February 2013:
I love how close the trio still are, despite hermiones memory loss. And the part when she first sees her dad and he doesn't recognize her.. Heartbreaking!
Author's Response: You need your friends to get you through tough times. The boys are trying to help wherever hermione will let them. I love her dad, it was quite sad writing this chapter. Thanks for reading!
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{reviewid: 2771696, reviewer: 'Looove'}
20th February 2013:
Eek he gave her his coat! Their interaction was SO well done.
And I loved the conversation with Ron too. So good!
Author's Response: Aww thank you. Ron is feeling a bit over protective and lost at the moment, I thought he played his part pretty well in this chapter. Draco was actually nice in this chspter, but don't expect that forever! Thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 2771695, reviewer: 'Looove'}
20th February 2013:
Neville was lovely! And the first mention of Draco made me squeal a bit. Subtle, but very well done. Poor Lavender!
Author's Response: I always thought that after the war, Neville would be a much bigger person. Very confident and brave. Poor lavender :(
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{reviewid: 2771694, reviewer: 'Looove'}
20th February 2013:
Great introduction! Very descriptive without being too over the top. Almost believable, if they weren't magical people in a nonexistent hospital haha
Author's Response: Thank you! One of my biggest motivators is making sure my characters are believable. It's a relief to hear you think they are!
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{reviewid: 2771693, reviewer: 'Looove'}
20th February 2013:
Wow, well done. You're such a good writer! I really love this so far. It was super angsty at the start, but now it's evened out a lot which is good. Please update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your amazing reviews! I really appreciate them. I just read my own writing from start to where it is currently, and you're so right - she is super angsty! Hopefully it's not as bad now that she's feeling a bit more in control.
I've already written the next chapter, now it's just a matter of waiting for my other story's chapter to be validated. Thanks again for reading, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when it's updated.
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{reviewid: 2769432, reviewer: 'HuffGriffSlyRaven'}
8th February 2013:
So well written, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you think so. Thank you for your review! I'll update very soon :)
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{reviewid: 2768267, reviewer: 'megthechef43'}
3rd February 2013:
bester_jester,
I'm glad that Hermione was able to talk to Lavender. Hopefully, Lavender stills finds Ron attractive. (I'm not a Ron/Hermione fan at all.) Maybe they will start dating when he realizes that Hermione isn't going back to who she used to be. I like what Lavender said to Hermione about the change being good for her.
I can't wait to see what happens in detention!
Until next time...
Meg
Author's Response: Hi!
Wow you really don't like Ron and Hermione do you! Detention is coming up soon!
Thanks for reading and reviewing
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{reviewid: 2767602, reviewer: 'bookworm530'}
31st January 2013:
Interesting...keep it coming!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I think! Haha will do.
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{reviewid: 2767593, reviewer: 'Emmy'}
31st January 2013:
Wow, amazing story so far. Dramiones are super common, but i like the memory twist. You've done a great job so far, really giving Hermione a voice that is completely believable
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so. My aim is to make Hermione really believable, so your review is a bit of a relief! Thanks heaps for the read and review.
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{reviewid: 2767498, reviewer: 'megthechef43'}
31st January 2013:
bester_jester.
Yeah!! I good ending to the chapter. That makes me so happy to read that Hermione MAYbe learning and remembering her past a little bit. Draco is horrible and I love it. Again slow moving stories are so much better than whipping through and making Draco a good person the instant he lays eyes on Hermione. Great job so far!!
Also, I just want to say/point that you write really well and it is enjoyable and easy to read and picture what you are trying to say. I also love that you are spreading out the plot and not focusing on just the Dramione part of your story.
Can't wait to read more.
Until next time...
Meg
Author's Response: I loved putting that little bit in, with the shield spell. I love that you love that Draco is horrible! I think that the detention situation is completely cliched on this site and I'm considering changing it, but I guess I'll see how it goes for now.
Thanks for your kind words, and for all of your reviews! I really appreciate you taking time out of your day to do so.
The next chapter is waiting to be validated. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on it! Unfortunately, it doesn't feature much of Malfoy.
bester_jester
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