I love this being from Jack's point of view, his crush on Lucy is so cute!
And his hatred for Louis is sweet, he's only looking out for his friend, he must really care about Ciaran and want to protect him if he's willing to go through all of that pain to have his legs healed.
I can't wait for you to write more missing moments, this is a great idea! and I've loved reading this :D Report Review
I'm finally reading a missing moment :D
I really enjoyed reading the story from Louis's point of view, its strange to have you describe the things that Louis can see. I'm so used to reading about what Ciaran can hear, so it's good to have the colour of Lucy's hair mentioned and Louis checking out Ciaran.
I am loving the missing moments :D Report Review
THIS IS AMAZING! I love everything! The idea of missing moments, the Lucy and Jack thing... urrghh just want more! Could I humbly suggest finding out who Hugo's crush is? I've been wondering about that since you mentioned it in Enchanted. :) Love love love this universe of characters. Keep writing and being amazing! :D
xxAuthor's Response: Hey, Asher!
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it. And not only will I write a missing moment about Hugo and his crush, but it will also come up in the next chapter of Enchanted. :D
Thank you for leaving such an amazing review. :)
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Luka is the head boy, isn't he?Author's Response: Yes, he is. :D Report Review
Sam this was so awesome! I'm so excited to read all the missing moments from Enchanted! This was such a good idea, and it makes me want to write something like this! I don't think I'd be able to pull it off though. Luka, Luka, Luka. I wish I could remember him but I can't! I have a feeling that Ciaran isn't his biggest fan, but I may be totally off... How did he come into Enchanted? I loved getting a little of Louis's point of view, and can't wait to see who's next! Also, I think it would be fun to read Louis's side of the story during the New Year's Eve party! This was an amazing chapter, Sam! 10/10
Cassie :)Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it would be a good idea to know the thoughts of everyone else, rather than just Ciaran. I'm glad you like it. I'm sure you could write something like this, too.
I will say who Luka is in the A/N on the next missing moment. Unless you really wanna know, then I'll tell you on the forums. :)
I like you idea of Louis's thoughts during the New Year's Eve party. And next is Jack.
Thanks so much, Cassie. :)
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OMG OMG OMG YAY!
Yeah, so I'm not patient, but I did pick the title! :D And then forgot it a couple of times, so well done for remembering :P
"I really should have introduced him in first year," she sighs, shaking her head. That would be best if she wants to talk to me about him. I think I love Louis' narration more than Ciaran, if that is even possible. He is so funny! I loved everything about this chapter, from Louis referring to Ciaran as Bright Eyes to him looking at his bum, to Lucy being lovely and wow, Sam, you've completely surpassed yourself! I'd also almost forgotten how good you are at description, after reading so much of Ciaran. Oooh, on a similar note, can we see Louis paint? Preferably paint Ciaran? TA.
It's amazing, and I really want to hear more from Louis soon. Please! And Lucy! And Jack also!
Thanks for posting it! ;)
- JennyAuthor's Response: I love that you're not patient. When people push for more, I actually write. I love it! :D
I did not think that was possible, but yay. I think. There will be a chapter where Louis is painting. What will it be? You'll have to wait and see... ;)
The next chapter will be Jack's POV. :)
Thank you for the title and for reviewing. Love you, too, Jenny.
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