4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by potterfan310 Chapter Four

28th December 2012:
Hey,

I love teen pregnancy stories and I love Albus/OC.
It's nice for a change to see two OC characters especially since it wasn't one of the Potter/Weasley clan who knocked Ashley up.

I really like Ashley and her personality, you've done a good job making her your own. I'm curious as to who her mother was through, was it a cannon charcter or an OC??

Albus is such a sweetie, and I think having him and Ashley as best friends rather than him being the father is great, since we don't see that much.

I have a feeling that maybe Ashley and Al get together and then they tell everyone the baby's his or he takes the role as the baby's dad once it's born.

I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Deffinatly adding it to my favs :D
10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph :)

Author's Response: This is lovely to hear! I honestly gave up on this because it seemed to me that it wasn't good enough and I didn't think anyone liked it, haha. Thank you very much, you've inspired me to carry on!

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Review #2, by Dare to dream Chapter 3

17th September 2012:
so i really like this story please update soon :)

Author's Response: Aw that has made my day! Don't worry, I am writing the next chapter as we speak!xxx

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Review #3, by BBWotter Chapter Two

1st September 2012:
oh my god, that nearly made me cry! :( i love albus!!! :) xx

Author's Response: I love him too! Aw wow, I'm sorry for nearly making you cry! Thankyou so much for reading it and reviewing, especially that it made my day tbh!!xx

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Review #4, by taurus Chapter One

22nd August 2012:
Hey, so your writing is good I like it, but I'm sorry but the plot is so overused. You should write something else, not a pregnancy story. There are so many out there, and most of them aren't really good. I think you should put your talent to something more original and creative. I'm sure you can come up with something besides a pregnancy story.

Author's Response: Thankyou for your review, I guess I should have researched abit because I haven't read many pregnancy fics, I am trying to think up something else that's more original but even though i love doing it, writing doesn't come as natural to me as others so it takes a while. Again thankyou for your compliment it's very much appreciated :-)

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