Reading Reviews for Ancient Relics
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Fastreader12 The Explanation

8th May 2014:
I love this story! Please keep going, writing, and updating! Thank you!

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Review #2, by Fastreader12 The Explanation

8th May 2014:
I love it! Please keep writing, it was very good! Please update soon!

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Review #3, by AHHH A conversation

25th May 2013:

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Review #4, by lauraf68 A conversation

15th May 2013:
Just found your story and read through all chapters posted before reviewing. Very engaging premise. I was completely in shock when you had Voldemort cast old magic and then have him disappear (I really want to know how he learned it). I thought for sure Harry would still defeat him. I felt the anguish Harry would have experienced.

This chapter was nice for tying up some loose ends, although I wonder if Lavender survived? After Merlin sat down and Fawkes showed up, I felt relieved. BUT, then When he introduced himself, I felt like he said too much. His comment about "family myth" and "wishful thinking" feels like a bold faced lie that may count against him later. Just feel like he could have left off the "wishful thinking".

Your writing style is fluid and very explanitory, which is nice because of the changes you have made. I give you a 9/10 on this chapter (mostly because of the one comment). However if I were to rate the piece as a whole it would be 10/10!!!

Happy Writing!! -Lauraf68

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Review #5, by keiner A conversation

10th May 2013:
Can t wait to read more

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Review #6, by sio The Battle

15th December 2012:
This is awesome :) love it :P

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Review #7, by markdbailey01 Waiting

27th August 2012:
I like where this is going.. .

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