:'( that's all I have to say for now, oh and this story is pretty AMAZING! :'( Report Review
I think this is an awesome story! Please update ASAP! Report Review
From the way you have written this, it seems obvious the James Potter was the one using the Map under the Invisibility Cloak and thus was the one who assaulted Clover. If not, then surely he leant the Cloak and Marauders'' Map to someone so that they could assault her.Author's Response: You seem really intelligent, but it actually wasn't James. Believe it or not, he wasn't that cruel. It was someone else though - keep your eyes open for them. It could be anyone! Report Review
Omg. This officially is my favorite story. can`t wait for your update. :) Report Review
Good story so far! Can't wait for you to develop all the characters a bit. I really liked the interaction of the Golden trio-it made me laugh. Update soon :) Report Review
You're story is AWESOME!
Please please write more!!!
I really love the story right now and it is a brilliant plot line of her being really smart :D
I don't think there are enough Slytherin characteristics in her though. At the moment, I can see Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff and Grifindor but not Slytherin.
Her back story is good as well and hopefully we will find out more about how she feels about her father being in Azkaban.
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It's pretty good, but I think James and Fred's actions seem a little too exaggerated. I think that they should hold a deep resentment and hatred towards slytherins, but the whole 'what should we subject nott and montague to today' was over the top. Otherwise great story line and characters.Author's Response: Ok, I know this is probably the LATEST response in the world, but I really want to respond. Yeah, um, it's been a year since I wrote this and reading it now, I can see that their bullying is a little over the top. Don't worry, I'll tone it down. Report Review
i love it. can`t wait for your update. :) Report Review
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