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O.M.G!!! Can I just give him a hug or something, that was jsut so sad! Wel the first part, and the bit about his gran, aww poor Neville. He's been getting put down his whole life and you showed that beautifully. You seem to be able to put a lot into a little and it's amazing! You really make the reader feel for Neville.
The next part, I love how he just decides enough is enough and it doesn't matter what others say because he can, and will, do something to save Hogwarts! I love how you brought Luna into it, you compared them really well, becuase even though they were both sort of outcasts Luna handled it better and it's nice that Neville picked up on that and wanted to change! Great job! :) Report Review
Hey Amy! This was lovely! You really showed Neville's emotions well, and I liked the way you contrasted Neville and Luna. The start was sad, hearing how Neville is always beaten down, but how that turned to Neville promising to stand up for Hogwarts was really touching.
I really liked this short piece, it was lovely and touching. NEVILLE IS THE GRYFFIE CHAMPION!
- JennyAuthor's Response: Jenny! Neville is the Gryffie champion! I'm glad you liked it!! Thank you for the review!!! Report Review
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