i really like this story ! she seems funny and kick-ass, scorpius is a bit of a twatasourous (love that word) but i can't wait to see her and james get it on :) review soon !Author's Response: Thanks yeah that might be a while away haha. Thank you for the review! :) x Report Review
Hi! First off, I really liked your banner. It's awesome.
I like where you're going with this plot. It's funny, and I like the idea of house rivalry. You've got the snark in her.
However, a bit of criticism. I know it's joking around and everything, but sometimes having a joke or snarky comment every two lines makes it hard to read. Maybe reach into her thoughts quickly about what's out the window or something; it doesn't alwasy have to expand the plot. Also, don't overdo her character. Even though I like the snark, you can tone it down a little to make her a little more realistic.
That said, I do like this story, and I'll be keeping tabs on it.
Shindig :DAuthor's Response: Same haha. Yeah i get what you mean i suppose, ill try to rectify that in the future i'm just not the best at trailing thoughts etc. unfortunately but obviously i'll try hard haha. Thanks for the review :) Report Review
okay first i have to say that you have the best banner i have ever seen in my entire life.
great plotline, i can see it going places (:
also, who is the boy in the back? the one that is 'the best looking?'
because, if its already mentioned that she'll get with potter...anway, i cant wait to read the next chap (:
but really, im saying this again, you have an excellent plot and its written beautifully with snark, and sarcasm and its really nice so yay for you(:Author's Response: Thanks! I love it too haha. Thanks again haha i love it when people review, made my day :) Report Review
Oh~ I`m so curious and excited to what will happen about that holiday! I wanna know! I wanna know! *grins*
I can`t wait to read more of these!
-Failed_and_ForgottenAuthor's Response: Thank you! I've got the next chapter already written so it'll be up soon :) x Report Review
I really liked this chapter! Though, I felt it was a bit short, but nevermind...
It seems like a really nice story so I hope you'll update soon!Author's Response: Thanks you! :) Report Review
LOVED IT! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!
Hm, who was that blushing boy?? I WANNA KNOW!
Anywho, I really like this story. It shows that just because Slytherins act like that doenst mean theyre like that on the inside!
Hehe, Gryffie's.. I love that word for some reason.
Anywho again, I love how you gaveus readers an insight on what's going to happen. Whenever I read this I'm going to be like, I knwo he's gunna break her heart, awww, DONT DO IT JAMES!! And so on...
Sorry for this odd review... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
~BeckiAuthor's Response: Ooh first review! Thank you so much, gracious long-named person. Firstly i wanna say that i'm sorry if this disappointing you but he really plays no part in this story which brings me to ask myself why i even included him but-oh well.
Yeah i know but not much realllyyy goes on thought id include a treat of sorts.
Again though, thank you thank you thank you for the review you make me happy.
I'm actually just about to put it up for validation so woop woop for me!
-Mary Report Review
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