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Review #1, by putyourname An Owl's Gift

5th September 2012:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! LOVE THE STORY!! PLEASE UPDATE IM DESPERATE

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Please read my new story The Love of Shadows, it's based on this one because sadly I can't continue it. Again thank you!

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Review #2, by putyourname Stolen

5th September 2012:
this might be weird but i dreamt something similar like your story,bplease continue writing!

Author's Response: Hiya, sorry it's taken so long to reply. I'm afraid I can't continue this story but please check out my new one The Love of Shadows. It's based on this one so feel free to read it, if you haven't already!

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Review #3, by Lyndsey Stolen

17th August 2012:
Woww your so original. this is like, exactly like harry potter dude! my advice would be to change it so that its actually ORIGINAL!

Author's Response: Hey, this is my first time. I know a lot of people do the 'twin sister' thing but there is actually quite a lot of stuff in the Elven world, the characters, the plots of what happens there and quite a lot of the names are my own, and the names and stuff that aren't my own I do note about. I wrote the first draft nearly two years ago and borrowed some of the names because I thought they were good. What would you suggest?

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