Intriguing, and good first-chapter character development. Good use of day-to-day interaction to bring out the characters, and to recall the past while setting up the present. The chapter feels like Rowling's writing--enough detail to paint the picture, and to make the reader feel at home with the characters. I definitely want to know what comes next, and hope the author decides to plot out what might happen next. Report Review
I loved this. I thought the style of the writing really mimicked JKR. The story and characters were engaging and the details were entertaining. The banter between characters was really enjoyable. At the end i wished there was another chapter. I hope this author continues to write this story. I want to know what happens! Report Review
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