this is really interesting cant wait to see the next chapters! XD Report Review
Oh my! Pansy and Ginny! I can't wait for THAT to play out! Also can't wait for the next chapter! And what is going on with Draco/Neville? You must update soon. :) Report Review
um confused here... what's with Neville?Author's Response: You shall see very very soon :) Report Review
This is a good start :) I'm interested to see where you're going with the story from here!
The only things that were a little off-putting was the massive spacing (I know the editor adds spaces every time you preview, but it really does read so much better when you have single or double spacing), and that you accidentally wrote 'purpose' instead of 'propose' when Hermione's thinking about Ron. I had to think a little to work out what you meant, so you might want to fix that some time.
Oh, and I liked that you had Harry be the first one to reconcile with Draco- not many people do that, and it was a welcome change.
Keep writing! :) Report Review
This story has potential! I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store :) Update soon! Happy writing! Report Review
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