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Review #1, by Mar From The End, It Begins

17th August 2014:
I LOVED IT! Great story and well written, please continue !

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Review #2, by PhoenixPulse The Beginning Of The End

14th August 2012:
Urgh, this was heart breaking, especially towards the end. I hate reading Sirius being abused, but you written the chapter so well, and I applaud you for that!

I like how written Regulus as well. You made it to where he has a great relationship with Sirius and James, yet keep the fact that he's loyal to the rest of the family at the same time.

My favorite scenes are when James watches Sirius and his father quarelling. The feelings just radiated off of my screen, and I could litterally hear their fighting and Sirius being slapped around. It was really well written! And I enjoyed the diner scene too. Sirius acted just like how he really would've done.

Anyway, great story. I added it into my favorites, just to let you know :)

Author's Response: Aww! I love hearing I've evoked an emotional response in readers. It was a struggle for me to write it; Sirius is usually so strong and so buoyant that beating him down went against the grain. :S
I had a lot of fun with Regulus. I know Sirius 'hated' him in J.K.'s version, but I couldn't bring myself to believe that and so I couldn't write it that way. This was a really good chance to show the dynamics of their relationship because I neglected it in 'White Flags'. :S But yes, I did need to keep him loyal to the Black family above all else.
I must admit, I enjoyed that scene, despite Orion being horrible. I think it's a really crucial moment in James and Sirius' friendship, because at that point, James has been exposed to all of Sirius' home-life, and he doesn't condemn him for it, but rather steps in and tries to protect him. Haha, yes, the dinner scene was a favourite too - I had so much fun with Sirius' character. :D
Aww! Thank you! :D
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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Review #3, by Jen From The End, It Begins

14th August 2012:
Just want to let you know that I absolutely LOVE this. Very powerful.

Author's Response: Aww! I'm so glad you liked it. :) Powerful is what I was aiming for. :)
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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