So is Draco going to sacrifice himself to save Harry to show Hermione just how much he really loves her? because if so, I will love this even more. I will need to buy a box o tissues because I'm going to be crying in the end. Report Review
Why? Why must you hurt me like this? How dare you? Why? This story fell into one of the greats. But why? Author's Response: Fear not! I'm working on the ending. It's not over yet!! Report Review
I absolutely love the idea! It's something entirely different from what I have read so far.
I'm looking forward to reading more soon!Author's Response: Thanks! It was fun inventing some new things and going a different way. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Report Review
OMR. Your making my cry!!!
This is so wonderfully written and it is so dramatic!!! I love it.:) You are now one of my favorite authors..
I just love your writing so much!
Sarah.!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate that! You might be happy to hear I've got a new story in the works as well. :) Report Review
this is so sad! please transform the plot into a happy one!!
well written, though. :)Author's Response: It's a little bittersweet, yeah. Thanks for sticking with it, though! Report Review
Omg... MORE!! 10/10 granger_Author's Response: More is coming! Promise! Report Review
Omg. I need more please :)Author's Response: On the way! Glad you're enjoying it! Report Review
So the mystery man is a wizard, hm? And a bad guy! I really liked the fight, and that he kicked down her door while the neighbors were all: "what's going on here?" The ferrero rocher is adorable, as if you didn't know ;)Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it! I'm trying to branch out in my style a little bit. A little adventure, a little mystery, a little humor...I'm glad you're not like, "Wow, this is lame. Never write anything again." lol Report Review
Nosebleeds, hm? And a mystery man at the computer... very intriguing!Author's Response: Yes, nosebleeds. Wait for it. All will become clear in time! Report Review
Last paragraph was really sweet it made me laugh. Loving the story so far update soonAuthor's Response: I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it! Chapter 3 was a lot of fun to write. And Chapter 4 is in the queue, so you won't have long to wait! Thanks for stopping by! Report Review
Well, I know I've already told you this, but... this is going to be good. ;)
I love the funny little things between them. His writing all over her documents, the adjoining room (at the Wayward Imp! Fantastic name!) and her expecting to see hangers but seeing his face, instead... Funny! I love this kind of writing! Eager for the next chapter! :DAuthor's Response: I'm really taking a chance here, by posting while I'm still writing, but I just like this idea so much!!
And I'm glad you like their banter...I'm trying my hand with a little bit of humor. Not everything can be heavy the whole time! Report Review
great first chapter! i love the story so far and the way you portray the characters! can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting! I hope you continue to enjoy the way this develops! Report Review
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