when I read what happened to Dean I was like No... I'm so confused about Draco I can't tell if he is an enemy or not. hope to read more soon :-)

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Flawless as always! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

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OMG so that was like, amazing!! I'm glad you changed the scene with Hermione/Draco being together into a dream--it fits better and seems much more realistic. I'm so excited for what you have next because this is much improved and I love it and you are a fantastic author and this is one story that deviates from the rest and really stays true to character. *breathes* Great job, I'm waiting for the next amazing chapter! :) xx

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Draco is their new ally!! :D I'm glad you decided to rewrite this story because it is so much improved and the twists and emotional grasp are much more developed. Hermione and Draco becoming closer? *gasp* oh noes! She's gonna get her heart broken soon I have a feeling.But if not, thanks ;) Great job with this chapter, looking forward to the next one! xx

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Thank you for updating. It wasn't a bad chapter! I did like reading Harry's POV!

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Loved it! Harry's POV made it all the better! ;) I like how you kept referring to Harry/Ron's opinions while Hermione was thinking of things because it shows how much she depends on them and them on her for balance and stability in life. And then the END!! Urgh Hermione & Draco's walk in the garden! So well-done! :) Phenomenal, excited for the next chapter! xx

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GAH i am like awe poor Hermione for not being able to help but i see Draco is trying to also Protect her at least in my eyes it seems that way! Great chapter!

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ARGH WHY WHY WHY! :((( Such a good ending though! :D I absolutely love this rewrite--the detail and thought process Hermione has is so much better and fits with the tone a lot more. :) I think to change it up some you should have a chapter or a part of one from Draco's POV or even Harry/Ron's POV just to show the other side. That would then help to relate Hermione's situation to everyone else's. Anyway, fantastic so far, keep it up! :) xx

Author's Response: I'll definitely think about adding a POV from Ron and Harry, but not from Draco. His actions within the story is a bit of a mystery. I already have ideas floating in my brain for Harry's POV. Ahh. Okay. Thanks for the review!!
xxLK

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I love it. I love it. I love it. Next chapter please, I can't wait :)

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Oh my gosh this chapter was so emotional! I loved it! Can't wait to read the next one!

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Wonderful as always! Keep it up! :)

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Interesting start to the story! I am happy i decided to read this... Hope to read more soon!

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A wonderful story!!! I think I'm in love with it! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

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Hello again! I'm glad you are rewriting all of your chapters to improve--all great writers do it. :) Even so, you have a few tense mistakes in some spots. You will have something in past tense then in the same sentence it will be in the present tense. Other than that, I really liked this chapter! The characters sounded much more like themselves and it all seemed more plausible and realistic. Good job, I'm excited to read the rest of the re-writes! :) xx

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Can't believe you are rewriting the whole thing! I am excited to see where this goes! Loved the old version!

Author's Response: I am so happy you loved the old one and I hope you love this one just as much! Chapter 2 will be posted very soon!

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Wait a minute what happened last time I checked you had a whole lot more chapters... are u rewriting?

Author's Response: Oh yes. I am rewriting the whole thing. I already have 7 of 14 reworked and a lot of its the same, but I've changed a good bit and added a few things and even taken away a lot, but all in all, it's still the same.

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OOOH I LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH!!! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!! :-)

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