So this was really interesting to read because I'm in the same position as Dominique right now - I'm leaving high school in a few weeks. I think a lot of people are, actually, especially as you've made Dominique so relatable, which isn't easy to do - that feeling of nostalgia mixed with a weird kind of dread is a difficult one to capture in words, and you've done it wonderfully.
I did notice a couple of typos, so you might want to look over that. Otherwise, well done! :) Report Review
This story is a perfect depiction of not wanting to grow up. Lots of times I feel exactly like Dom does -- it's like you read my mind and put it into words! Very well done! :) Report Review
Even though this was short, i think it was amazing. I feel almost the same as that often, like life is just going too fast and you have to let things go, even when you don't want to. I think the emotion was perfect, how could you leave somewhere that basically defined your life?! I think you wrote this story beautifully, it flowed extremely well and it was graceful (how that describes a story, I will never know) I think that this was wonderful and perfect. Report Review
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