'm sure you've almost forgotten you even requested a review from me, seeing as it's been about a month;/ I'm so sorry about that/ My hiatus wasn't by choice but I'm determined to get back into the swing of things.
Of course I like this story, what a silly thing to ask! I love everything you write so I will admit I went in with terribly high expectations.
The descriptions, my darling, were wonderful. I had everything pictured so clearly in my mind. There was just enough to really bring the story to life but not enough to make the story dull. I love that instead of the usual flashback style one would usually attempt was approached with a twist of using the pictures instead. it made me bring it to life myself, and I loved that.
I loved the emotions, despite that I was very close to crying, and they were very strong and full-blown. Thats a very good thing, and I adore it!
I've never read anything like this for Hermione, so I really enjoyed this. It's funny, I don't think I've ever put too much thought into the trio in a situation even close to this age/situation so I loved that you've attempted it, and a good attempt at that!
I pulled this story up with incredibly high expectations and they were all blown out of the water! Incredible job!
EverAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! No I didn't forget about it, I just knew that you were busy and would get to it whenever you could. :)
I am glad that you liked the descriptions and the flashbacks. It was really difficult for me to pick out what memories I wanted to display for her character to relive. I also wanted to play into Hermione's love for books. Even if that did mean an non-educational book.
I've always wondered who would out live who in the situation of what trio member would go first, second and third. I always figured Hermione would stand the test of time better than the other two would be able to.
Thanks again for the review!!
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I loved this, it was so bitter-sweet. :D
Beautifully written!Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I am glad that you loved the story! :)
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